i speak a little french
but i'm going to review in english. i will try to use words that are easy to translate from english into french. it's apparent that you are new to the music thing, so i will give you some general pointers. try to get some different drum samples, the ones that come with fl studio are okay but they are overused and aren't the best samples available. ask people on newgrounds, plenty of the guys here will be more than happy to provide some good drum samples. since this is your fourth submission, there is not a whole lot i can really say. my fourth song was about as half as good as this. just remember that the more you make music, the better you'll get. practice makes perfect! another thing to do is listen to the music of other people, and of course review other people and ask for feedback. good luck with your future music =)